literature

Trapped in Youself

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Literature Text

Look around, and see the Brokenness out there
It's all around, and you don't even care.

[chorus]:
Trapped inside your selfish needs
Shunning everything so you cannot see;
This life you live is falling down,
Can't wait until you hit the ground.

You fall apart and you think that it's the end,
But from the start, It's only happening again

(Happening again...)

 [chorus]

Fighting for everything you want
Won't get you anywhere,
your life might seem full, 
But in truth it's bare.
Take a look at those you see,
They might be the ones in need.

[chorus]

Break away from all you need,
Healing woulds that only bleed.
Saving those in misery,
Maybe then you you will receive.
looking back at this song I wrote, i kinda like it, i should try to fit it into a song for my band, now to find a tune and riff to go with it
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Splooshedonawall's avatar
This is really good! I like it a lot. You should totally put this to a melody :love: